Tuesday, May 29, 2012

1B4 Ayato & Kentaro


Hi, we are going to talk about Wagashi, Convenience store and Mt,fuji.

I like Wagashi very much
Wagashi is traditional foods.
Wagashi is low caloriery than yogashi.

I like convenience store.
They sell many foods and cosmetics and books.
Convenience store has many services.
For example copy machine and Fax and ATM.
Convenience store is interesting.
I 'm go to convenience store sometimes.

I like Mt,Fuji because very beautiful.
Mt,Fuji is between Yamanashi and Shizuoka.
Mt,Fuji is the highest mountain in Japan.
Altitude is about 3776 meter.


  1. Hi Ayato & Kentaro,
    You spoke very clearly. Good job!

    Let me point out 5 things for you to be better understood.

    1. Wagashi is traditional foods. 1種類の食べ物なので単数に -> Wagashi (Japanese-style sweets) is a traditional food.

    2. Wagashi is low caloriery than yogashi. 「和菓子は洋菓子よりカロリーが低い」-> Japanese sweets are lower in calories than western(-style) sweets.

    3. I like convenience store. 一軒だけの話ではないので複数形に。-> I like convenience stores.

    4. I 'm go to convenience store sometimes. *'m は be 動詞ですよ!be 動詞の後ろには、絶対、動詞の原形はきません!-> I go to a convenience store sometimes.

    5. because very beautiful *主語+動詞がないですよ!-> because it is very beautiful

  2. Ayato & Kentaro6/05/2012 3:28 PM

    We want to learn traditional, lower, calories, store and sometimes.


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